You did a good job of making sure that no matter where the scene was he was still lipping the right words.
Here is a good suggestion for your next one. take the type of song it is, and find 2 famous artist music videos that the same kind of song, then look at what they did, and try to take the two concepts of what they did and do a something inbetween both. This will give you good creative ideas that look more high level production but at the same time nobody will say you copied anyone.
also if he wants to have a nice music video he needs to dress more like he is official, dew rags are not official tell him to dress like T.I. or Chamillionaire
