Well, you’ve got lot’s of eye

Well, you've got lot's of eye candy there…and all the right buzz words. Not sure that it adds up to an effective promo though. The 'dead-air' from 14-21 seconds seems out of place, as does the rotating earth graphic. Do you have sample productions that you could show? It appears that you're selling yourself as a motion-graphics artist. If that is the case, then this promo would make more sense.