The music is EPIC, but the

Luis Maymi LopezLuis Maymi Lopez

The music is EPIC, but the video not so much. I agree with David-forrester “…what is the story? I am
begging for a story here – action, thriller, motion, events – something,
anything to match the music.”.
Take some time learning how to craft a good story and go shoot again with your story in mind. Here is a great resource just for that:

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