The framing and audio levels are good. Like Earl mentioned I will reinforce with cutaways, which could be just adding several royalty free pictures between different shots while she stills is talking (basically J and L Cuts). An upbeat music in the background helps a lot in this kind of interviews because it gives some life to the video.
There is just one problem with your video, is in mono. This means that it can only be heard on the left side of headphones. People who don’t useheadphoneswill not notice this because (from laptops at least) it seems your hearing from one audio source. Depending on your video editing software you can convert mono to stereo really easily, but if you don’t have such a feature you can use Audacity (free).
