Thanks for all the feedback! I do apolagize for the initial video quality – This was my first music video, and I hadn't realized how much compression hurts the video quality. Aside from this, I had been shooting on a consumer camcorder for this – I have now invested in a canon gl1 (Old, I know, but so far it's working great for me). Aside from this, the music was not made or influenced at all by me – they were created by a friend of mine, and sang by the two main characters within the video.
