Thanks for all the feedbac
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Thanks for all the feedback, sorry I forgot to mention that the video is an instructional video on how to order parts correctly. The entire process can get pretty dirty if there is one small error, and these errors are very common so they want to make an exiting video to teach the mechanics and anyone else working at the base how to properly and efficiently order parts.
The process seems pretty simple, the audience is the group of mechanics that work at each of the three or four bases in California.
I just want this to be a great video so it can open more doors for me in the future =]