Sorry if this sounds harsh. I do lot’s of interviews, and have improved the most when I received valid criticisms. I wouldn’t shoot with a window in the corner, as the brightest objects tend to draw the eye. The framing could be tighter. Fill light or a bounce card would have been nice. The bookcase is a distracting mess of fallen books. Audio should have been faded in and out with each segment, and ambient noise is a bit of a distraction. Script fonts are generally tougher to read than a serif font like Times New Roman.
I hope this helps. Paying attention to the little details is a big part of getting a good looking interview.
