Song is good.  I agree with

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Song is good.  I agree with some of the previous comments.  Lighting could be better.  The shadow on the wall doesn't look great.  The b/w cutaways I would have done differently. 

My main critique though, is that you need more variety in your shots.  Next time you shoot a song, play the song upwards of 8-10 times.  Focus on different shots each time.  Wide shots one time, close ups another, medium shots, extreme close-ups, focus on just the guitar, the mic, just the singers face/eyes/mouth.  Get high angles, low angles, and side angles.  On a positive note, the camera shots are steady and have good fluid motion, so props there.

Good luck

 

Jon

http://www.creekhouseproductions.com

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