salim,
You’ve got some quality work going for you here. Very intense, and effective as is. If you really wanted to increase tension and comparison, you might go for a more side by side type of feel, show one part of the Maserati, then the similar part on the Dodge. You might try a split screen too.
Overall, it’s very engaging, I love the detail and smooth movement, and attention to the music. (I assume you’ve either got a great composer or found just the right stock media.) One small adjustment I’d make is putting gloves on the driver, it keeps it impersonal and more intimidating, which is kind of what you’re going for with the car vs. car theme.
By the way are you aware of our cover for July, and the article from the cover?http://www.videomaker.com/article/15483/
http://www.videomaker.com/issue/2012-07-01/
I’m excited to hear about more,
Jackson
