Only got half way though because it’s not my genre at all, but what stood out is that the images are grey, low contrasty and don’t look beautiful at all? All the distracting tarpaulins and backgrounds just look messy.It looks like a boat, but has no context, pictures of barns on grey days, and a rapper who looks like he was on a country ramble with waterproofs – just kind of what anyone on youtube sticks up – composition wise. The edits are ok, but I personally find cutting to a zooming camera from a zooming camera a bit jarring. I think the initial images are the proble – they could be tarted up with some grading, but they don’t say beautiful to me.
