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Now this is my personal opinion but I would have liked to have seen the singer with money and losing it. Another point is when he was running he did not seem that he did not know where he was going. More of a desperate mood would have helped, face shots of being confused / desperation would have helped. The only part that he seemed unsure was in the water. this video should have shown him completely unsure out his whole existence. Take it for what it is worth and think about it.l Others will chime in and might not agree with me, just my two cents worth. Good exposures and contrast. Think about it a little and see what you can come up with. I really think you could make a cool music video out of this.