Nice. Overall I found it a

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Nice. Overall I found it a very romantic piece and I’m sure the couple was more than pleased with it. As a shooter, I found the look a bit too flat and low contrast but it was consistent with the couple wearing black and white throughout the piece. Editing wise, my only beef was with the cuts showing the books up close. If that was to indicate the couple met while reading books in that park, the transition wasn’t clear and it seemed more like you just put that in there because they wanted it. It was a storytelling issue I felt got in the way of what you told later. Other than that, like I said it was a very nice piece. Good job.

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