@Luke – OK – 3 things: 1)

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Avatarbirdcat
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@Luke – OK – 3 things:

1) Audio @ 0:06 – 0:12 needs major work or re-recording – Consider using some b-roll and just recording voiceover at home.

2) Closing credits – Always best to end with a blank screen -You can freeze frame, just fade to black when done.

3) Cuts were good but could be more precise (downbeat of music)

Minor things in comparison to your first one – EXCELLENT progress on your part.

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