I found the bones inhis ba

I found the bones inhis background distracting. I didn’t mind the juice backgrounds under text. Kind of wondering why you opted to key him at all. If ya add s-linear curves to your text animations, they’ll come in and land much smoother. Watch your spill. We can see green spill on the chiro and as long as you are fixin’ that, he could use some color and contrast. I agree 4:30 is long. Ultimately, this is your clients call but always remind them less is more.

Overall, I’m sure he liked it.