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I agree – The music is wrong for the piece. I would go for a non vocal song (unless it’s talking about pollution or conservation).
Also, while you have the drinking water stats up on the screen, you’re showing steaming hot water – I had a disconnect there.
I also thought the countdown at the beginning was not needed unless you tie it to what I think you were trying to say (in that we are running out of time to save the planet). Maybe put some clips/stills behind each number showing pollution as it happens (smoke, water, litter, etc…) and change when the number does.