Hi happyfrogs44,

AvatarDaniel Bruns

Hi happyfrogs44,


You are a brave videographer indeed to invite opinions of a video on a forum! However, it is also a great way to get better at your craft so I congratulate you.


I would also second John's opinion. A solid yellow font is an odd choice for the flow of your video and outlined text, unless for a children's television show or for a carnival, should always be avoided. It tends to look like the default text option in Final Cut Pro. I would also encourage you to use a thinner, whispier font placed in the lower third of your screen. I think that would lend itself well to the editing style and musical feel of your piece. 


Other than that, I think it's a great start! If you just keep making videos like the one above, you'll get better in no time.


Dan Bruns

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