Grinner, Thanks for taking



Thanks for taking the time for watching, as well as the
thought out reply. I appreciate your honesty and encouragement!

I believe you may be
right about having too much text. I also
believe the lyrics are simple; I believe the target market would definitely be
a younger demographic. However, despite
the simple lyrics/sound, what would be a way to transform this video from a guy
in a field (both guys are me), to something better? I feel what youre saying, just having a hard
time visualizing anything different.

Anyone please feel
free to answer this question or comment!

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