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Evan, good work on the video! Like Birdcat I thought that the text could use some changes. Some of it is overlight and darker background at the same time. Some outlline or shadow should help it stand out. In each of the 2nd and 3rd videos there is a section during the voice over when the text is over a white background, perhaps some stills or video showing the subject being discribedcould be placed behind the text.
Overall it is a very good way of displaying the subject matter. Nice upbeat music, clear to the point voice over and lots of video of kids having fun (you can’t go wrong with that).