A few thoughts: The simple

A few thoughts: The simple white lettering on black background during the title sequence seems weak when compared to the rest of the higher-quality aspects of the video. I like the interspersing of pitches and the silent clips to break it up (for example, the raffle drawing). Camera height needed to be adjusted for subject height (compare the businesswoman ~4:40 vs. the businessman ~5:00). Finally, it would be a bit of extra work, but adding the individual's name, website/email/phone in the bottom-third could go a long way in improving the communication value. Best!

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