A few suggestions, not that I have shot any videos like this; when they are on the bench talking and you have them one at a time, have the girl in her original spot on the bench and keep the camera locked down for the whole bench interview. That would help in the continuity as it was a little jarring when they were not in their original positions. I was not too keen on the leg shots but that is only my opinion.
Even though they gave the same story three different times, you tied them in very nicely.
Personally, I think you did one heck of a job and I am sure they will love it.
