VFX Criticism?

[p0th3adParticipant]

hello, i'm a little new to this website, and i mainly come here in search for critisicm. while i may have not been editing for long, it keeps me motivated to hear how im doing, what i can improve on, or learning new tips. so i present a few of my works, in hopes of hearing what the fine folks here have to say:

for starters, i have a short Half Life 3 Teaser: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMoza54t4y4

in all honesty, i'm not very fond of it. it was pretty much a copy paste of copilots tutorial, except with a few added seconds. i really made it to break in after effects, since it used a wide range of AE's tools.

 

second, an unfinished typography test: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5vIIYLRvgw&feature=plcp

pretty self explanitory

 

lastly, a Face Form with trapcode: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NYNTNx7NbkA&feature=plcp

i look forward what some of you have to say!

[dstarksMember]

Pretty awesome man, you're way better than me!
You should make some tutorials 😀
-3D

[Anonymous]

Hey, nice job. I really like the typography test! Would be nice to see more of your works (maybe some longer ones). Either way I liked your teaser as well, it was short and sweet. I'm pretty much a beginner so I don't know if I have a place to give you critisism, but even so it would be hard to say with such short clips. Also I don't see anything negative, keep up the good work.

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