VFX Criticism?

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    • #52369
      Avatarp0th3ad
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      hello, i'm a little new to this website, and i mainly come here in search for critisicm. while i may have not been editing for long, it keeps me motivated to hear how im doing, what i can improve on, or learning new tips. so i present a few of my works, in hopes of hearing what the fine folks here have to say:

      for starters, i have a short Half Life 3 Teaser: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMoza54t4y4

      in all honesty, i'm not very fond of it. it was pretty much a copy paste of copilots tutorial, except with a few added seconds. i really made it to break in after effects, since it used a wide range of AE's tools.

       

      second, an unfinished typography test: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5vIIYLRvgw&feature=plcp

      pretty self explanitory

       

      lastly, a Face Form with trapcode: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NYNTNx7NbkA&feature=plcp

      i look forward what some of you have to say!

    • #207355
      Avatardstarks
      Member

      Pretty awesome man, you're way better than me!
      You should make some tutorials πŸ˜€
      -3D

    • #207687
      AvatarAnonymous
      Inactive

      Hey, nice job. I really like the typography test! Would be nice to see more of your works (maybe some longer ones). Either way I liked your teaser as well, it was short and sweet. I'm pretty much a beginner so I don't know if I have a place to give you critisism, but even so it would be hard to say with such short clips. Also I don't see anything negative, keep up the good work.

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