Short film under new brand

We have collaborated a group of filmmakers in the area to form Film Faction.  Basically it's a bunch of about-to-graduate college students that really want to move forward in a film career.  This short is the first of many under this new brand.  It was actually a midterm project that we had only a week to complete.  It was fun.  Personally, I got to be swinging a sword around and later got to edit music.  Let us know any criticsim any of you have.  We are trying to build an online audience and this forum looks to be very supportive.  Thanks!