Please critique my video

[Yulia]

Long time lurker, finally brave enough to post here.
 

Should be funny, creative, naive ad. Self produced so…Missing some unbiased input 🙂

 

[paulears]

Sorry – video is unavailable or removed.

[Yulia]

i’ve updated it, for some reasons it kept changing the URL

[rtfilms]

Great video, and a wonderful concept! Only thing I would prob do differently is trying to arrive at my point faster. People’s attention span is very short, so maybe cut it down some, and add a few different shots in for variety and you are good to go. I really enjoyed it though, so keep up the hard work. Remember at the end of the day you decide what your video is, and everyone else’s words are only opinions.

[arvindsin]

great and nice post

[bobspez]

Nicely done, but … too much writing, going by too fast. I did my best to keep up viewing it on full screen but gave up at the two minute mark.

[elong]

I really like the setting – a little more light shed would make perfect result!

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