Please critique my video

Viewing 6 reply threads
  • Author
    Posts
    • #96601
      Yulia
      Participant

      Long time lurker, finally brave enough to post here.
       

      Should be funny, creative, naive ad. Self produced so…Missing some unbiased input 🙂

       

    • #278128
      paulears
      Participant

      Sorry – video is unavailable or removed.

    • #278195
      Yulia
      Participant

      i’ve updated it, for some reasons it kept changing the URL

    • #283908
      rtfilms
      Participant

      Great video, and a wonderful concept! Only thing I would prob do differently is trying to arrive at my point faster. People’s attention span is very short, so maybe cut it down some, and add a few different shots in for variety and you are good to go. I really enjoyed it though, so keep up the hard work. Remember at the end of the day you decide what your video is, and everyone else’s words are only opinions.

    • #72002337
      arvindsin
      Participant

      great and nice post

    • #72002370
      bobspez
      Participant

      Nicely done, but … too much writing, going by too fast. I did my best to keep up viewing it on full screen but gave up at the two minute mark.

    • #72022691
      elong
      Participant

      I really like the setting – a little more light shed would make perfect result!

Viewing 6 reply threads
  • The forum ‘Miscellaneous Techniques’ is closed to new topics and replies.
homicide-bootstrap

Giveaway

Panasonic LUMIX GH5s w/ Leica lens

Given away to one lucky winner

Competition is open worldwide

ENTER TO WIN