Please critique my video

Yulia's picture
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Joined: 01/15/2018 - 3:19pm

Long time lurker, finally brave enough to post here.
 

Should be funny, creative, naive ad. Self produced so...Missing some unbiased input :-)

 


paulears's picture
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Joined: 11/05/2006 - 8:36am

Sorry - video is unavailable or removed.


Yulia's picture
Last seen: 2 months 1 week ago
Joined: 01/15/2018 - 3:19pm

i've updated it, for some reasons it kept changing the URL

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