Please critique my video

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    • #96601
      AvatarYulia
      Member

      Long time lurker, finally brave enough to post here.
       

      Should be funny, creative, naive ad. Self produced so…Missing some unbiased input πŸ™‚

       

  • #278128
    Avatarpaulears
    Participant

    Sorry – video is unavailable or removed.

  • #278195
    AvatarYulia
    Member

    i’ve updated it, for some reasons it kept changing the URL

  • #283908
    Avatarrtfilms
    Participant

    Great video, and a wonderful concept! Only thing I would prob do differently is trying to arrive at my point faster. People’s attention span is very short, so maybe cut it down some, and add a few different shots in for variety and you are good to go. I really enjoyed it though, so keep up the hard work. Remember at the end of the day you decide what your video is, and everyone else’s words are only opinions.

  • #72002337
    Avatararvindsin
    Participant

    great and nice post

  • #72002370
    Avatarbobspez
    Participant

    Nicely done, but … too much writing, going by too fast. I did my best to keep up viewing it on full screen but gave up at the two minute mark.

  • #72022691
    Avatarelong
    Participant

    I really like the setting – a little more light shed would make perfect result!

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