Please critique my video

This topic has 6 replies, 6 voices, and was last updated 7 months, 1 week ago by elong.

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- January 15, 2018 at 3:33 PM #96601
  Yulia
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  Long time lurker, finally brave enough to post here.
  
  Should be funny, creative, naive ad. Self produced so…Missing some unbiased input 🙂

January 17, 2018 at 10:02 AM #278128

paulears

Participant

Sorry – video is unavailable or removed.

January 26, 2018 at 6:22 AM #278195

Yulia

Member

i’ve updated it, for some reasons it kept changing the URL

May 24, 2018 at 6:41 PM #283908

rtfilms

Participant

Great video, and a wonderful concept! Only thing I would prob do differently is trying to arrive at my point faster. People’s attention span is very short, so maybe cut it down some, and add a few different shots in for variety and you are good to go. I really enjoyed it though, so keep up the hard work. Remember at the end of the day you decide what your video is, and everyone else’s words are only opinions.

October 19, 2018 at 12:17 AM #72002337

arvindsin

Participant

great and nice post

October 19, 2018 at 2:43 PM #72002370

bobspez

Participant

Nicely done, but … too much writing, going by too fast. I did my best to keep up viewing it on full screen but gave up at the two minute mark.

August 25, 2019 at 11:48 PM #72022691

elong

Participant

I really like the setting – a little more light shed would make perfect result!