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February 25, 2015 at 6:24 AM #85059Lonesome TravellerMember
Last year I went to Mexico during the day of the dead. I brought with me my Sony Camera and RÃ¸de Microphone to film a video journal. At first, I was thinking of uploading footage to youtube regularly, so that my folks at home could see what I was up to, but I quickly decided that it would be better to wait until I got home so that I could put together something better.
I've now turned the footage into a 20 minute journal/documentary type thing and need some critique. Be as harsh as you want as I'm sure people on Youtube are even harsher.
Keep in mind that this is not a commercial video, I have little experience, and no budget. It was made using a free edition of Lightworks.
Am I easy to understand? Is it easy to understand what's going on? Are any of my monolouges boring? Are there parts I should just remove from the video?
Some self-critisism first:
1. I would often zoom out or zoom in on things I was filming, because I thought going from an overview shot to focusing on an object and viceversa would look good. When I got home I discovered that I had done this on nearly every clip, which was way to much and made it hard to find clips where I wasn't constatly zooming.
2. I get anxious about filming in public. This means that I will often start filming, and quickly stop to avoid bringing attention to myself. It also means that most of my clips are shorter than I prefer, and many places I've had to use a series of short clips, where I'd prefer to use one that was longer.
3. The audio sounds louder in some parts than others. I'm going to fix that.
4. I use blackouts when there's a jump in time or change in scenery. Does this work?
Notes on specific parts:
1. The transition at 12:00 feels wierd. I tried to remove the dissolve and just have it jump straight from one clip to the next, but that also feels wrong. I feel like there should be another clip in between to make the progression feel more natural, though I don't know what to put.
2. I'm planning on getting 13:52 subtitled.
3. the travel montage that starts at 15:43 feels very long. I've shortened it down in Ligthworks, but haven't exported yet.
4. The title for chapter 4 starts at 18:00, a short while AFTER I've arrived in Zipolite. Is this a strange placement?
5. Does the minute long story at 19:20 feel unnecesary.
6. I have no idea how to end it.
Thanks to anyone that can provide feedback!
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