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    • #52994
      BusinessVideoTour
      Participant

      Created this simple video for a Smoke Shop. Wanted to get some feedback be it – or +.

      http://youtu.be/b3G4mzRJXe4

      Thanks,
      John

       

    • #205418
      Rocky
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      John, think the makeup of the video and music selection is totally dependent on the demographics  of the business' clientele. Fast modern music and short cut clips may be well suited to the younger generation, but would most probably switch off or not appeal to older generations.

       

      Having said that if the business clientele are mainly young and hip then you're 100% on target.

    • #205424
      pseudosafari
      Member

      I agree with Rocky M.  The only artistic suggestions I'd make is that the typefaces you used are a bit "80's" in appearance (to me, at least). Maybe use a different typeface or instead of zooming them in and out, apply a transition to them (like the smoke effect you used on the name at the end, perhaps?).  also, on that note, the logo at the end was a bit dark and harder to see (could be my screen or lighting, but take it for what it's worth).

    • #205453
      BusinessVideoTour
      Participant

      Thanks for the advice and tips. Will come in handy as I retool this.

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