Hey everybody,
This link is to an indiegogo campaign a few fellow students, and I, started a day ago.
http://igg.me/at/desistance/x/9941475
I'm not here asking for your money, rather, I'm looking for feedback on the campaign, and the story, as we have presented it. Thoughts when you see the campaign? Any blatant flaws? Things we should work on fixing, in your eyes? Any input is good. It's early in our campaign, and the pre-production of this series, so there's time for change, and improvement.
Our plan is to focus on action, as opposed to dialogue, and really work on building tension into the script in a variety of ways, keeping things interesting, even in lesser moments within the overall storyline. Easier said, than done, I know.
Also, we're aware the trailer had some flaws. More content is in the works to add to the campaign, to show better quality, which we're capable of, and to give some insights into the main character.
If you feel inclined to share the campaign, all the better. But any input this community has is what I'm interested in most. Thanks!
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