Asking for Constructive Critique

Yulia's picture
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Hello friends,
we recently started to do our own videos, and while it is supposed to be funny, maybe naive, creative, we somehow are missing unbiased view.

Creative people sometime get carried away with their own ideas about what is fun and usefull :-)

I have been lurker for almost a year, finally grabbed all my bravenes and posted it here:
Anyway, thank You,
Yulia


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It's gone again


Finncast's picture
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Yep no video to see. 

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Yulia's picture
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I'am sorry, it kept changing the URL. I updated it again...

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Hi Yulia,

Video is good but it has not real ending, is it finished or have  final editing to do?

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Yulia's picture
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Hi Finn,
thank you. it was supposed to end like that. Just that people would wake curious about the other ones (is a serie of teaser videos for features).

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Hi Yulia,

Iunderstand now. Well great work!

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Yulia's picture
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thank you!

here is a new one for valentine day's promo... Any comment on that?

 

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Hi,

Great video! I think the orange text is a little lost. Maybe a nice lower thirds with some hearts on it. Fade the lower third  in. Say a red & pink third with white tex and maybe a red heart or two, not too many though.

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Yulia's picture
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you mean  add hearts?

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Finncast's picture
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Yea Hearts i mean, give it a go see what happens. Can i take your footage and do it to show you? See what you think? I will use the lower thirds in Finncast Studio to do it

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Yulia's picture
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hey of course!

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Yulia's picture
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thank you, that looks awesome.

also, thank you for the effort!

i think i have to study your software :-)

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