Typography Test – Please Comment & Critique

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    • #48126
      AvatarAnonymous
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      Here’s a quick typography piece I made for a competition, feel free to
      critique and comment on my work. (Comment on other then the voice over
      please)

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dimzhohfm7M

      If I had more time I would have considered placing more symbols and images into it.

      Thanks,
      Corey

    • #197855
      AvatarGrinner Hester
      Participant

      very nice, Corey.

    • #197856
      Luis Maymi LopezLuis Maymi Lopez
      Participant

      Good job Corey. I think it was a little bit fast (no that much), but it shows the message clearly.

    • #197857
      AvatarGrinner Hester
      Participant

      naaa. Once you get the real VO in there, it’ll be fine.

    • #197858
      AvatarAnonymous
      Inactive

      Thanks everyone. It was a little hard to get all the information in 30 seconds, though I do agree. Thanks

    • #197859
      AvatarMoab Man
      Participant

      At first I had the same thought – it’s too fast – but too fast was effectiveon me because you had my full attention as I tried to keep up.

      Guess it’s a double edged sword. Some will dismiss it because it’s too fast while others will be drawn in for the same reason.

      Just curious, whatsoftware did you use?

    • #197860
      Avatarvid-e-o-man
      Participant

      Great job. I watched it a number of times. Fast pace helped keep our attention throughout the segment. I found the text a little hard to read (maybe my old eyes or the settings on my monitor). I was thinking that a border or shadow on text would help it stand out from the backgroundbut with the VO reinforcing the text I didn’t have any trouble following along. Once agagin great job!

    • #197861
      AvatarAnonymous
      Inactive

      Thanks everyone for thefeedback. Unfortunately I had to use the light blue on white for the second lot of text as when the camera zoomed in onto the letter, the BG had to be light blue.

      And I created this using After Effects CS4, whilst also using Videocopilot’s ‘Sure Target 2’

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