Short Film - On Wheels

If it is your first short film it is really COOL! There are some really neat shots. I liked particularly the ones taken from the board.

That said, it is too long. It does not seem to have a point to it, other than that skateboarding is fun. A short film needs a story, with a beginning, middle and end. You need to get into the story right off the bat. For more info, read "Making Short Films" by Jim Piper, and "Making it Big in Shorts" by Kim Adelman.

Heidi