Short Film - On Wheels

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This is our first short film - On Wheels

please tell us what you think!

Thank you for watching!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I-ZsxiXN7hU

for more info go to

http://www.timandmarcoareawesome.com/


hmueller's picture
Last seen: 2 years 8 months ago
Joined: 07/03/2009 - 6:12pm

If it is your first short film it is really COOL! There are some really neat shots. I liked particularly the ones taken from the board.

That said, it is too long. It does not seem to have a point to it, other than that skateboarding is fun. A short film needs a story, with a beginning, middle and end. You need to get into the story right off the bat. For more info, read "Making Short Films" by Jim Piper, and "Making it Big in Shorts" by Kim Adelman.

Heidi


Owlcrew's picture
Last seen: 8 years 10 months ago
Joined: 10/22/2008 - 2:06pm

interesting idea