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[Anonymous]

Hi, if you could take a moment to check out our work and offer some advice, I’d be very grateful. We’re beyond beginner, but have taken a real interest into making videos.

So any pointers, advice good or bad, would be great.

http://www.facebook.com/cavedemonproductions

Thank you and all the best

Cave Demon Productions.

[Kenkyusha]

The Trailer for Feline- great premise, good use of sound FX and framing of some of your shots (e.g. your main character drinking from the glass with the kitten calendar on the wall).  To my eye, the thing that needs most work is lighting (there were a bunch of dark and undefined images in Feline and Three Guys on a Couch).  That and the sound was blown-out in ‘3 Guys’.

HTH.

*Final nitpick, the Feline trailer has a billed time of over 4:00 despite the actual runtime- whatever upload issue you may have had, a newer one with accurate time would be better.

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