My first “professional” short film- thoughts?

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    • #46156
      AvatarTheAnthonyYa
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      Hi, I’m a student filmmaker who’s new to these forums. I’ve been making shitty little short videos for two years, but at the end of the last school year I worked with a production theater next to my school to make this sketch. And I’m just looking for opinions on it.

      When I watch it, my only change would be to add more jokes. The video is basically one long joke, but if I could change it I would add more jokes in general. But yeah, thank you for any criticism or whatnot!

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tVizgS6843M

    • #190638
      AvatarMediaFish
      Participant

      Not to be too harsh but – what makes this a professional short film? Did some one pay you to film and produce it? Again, not to be harsh but you state – “When I watch it, my only change would be to add more jokes” – really? What about sound, color balance, lighting, acting, the truck engine that starts out of nowhere as Man Man leaves on his scooter, the female coughing at the end of the joke or her bad wig she is wearing? My thought is that it needs a lot of work – sorry I am sure that wasn’t what you wanted to hear but you asked.

      I am really curious though why you think this isshould be considered a professional film.

    • #190639
      AvatarGrinner Hester
      Participant

      I hope nobody spent money on that. Keep shooting, keep loving it, and keep growing. Looks like you had fun making it. Never lose that.

    • #190640
      Avatarcomposite1
      Member

      Anthony,

      This is by no means ‘Pro’. YouTube Special, definitely. You need lights for your interior scenes, at minimum reflectors or bounce cards for your exteriors, consider doing voice-overs for your vocal tracks and lots more camerawork. Student film at best right now.

      On the other hand, a clever idea with lots of potential. Do as Grinner said, ‘keep shooting’. Push the envelope with this thing. Believe it or not, ‘Average’ has a lot of lattitude and you can make this thing the hilarious series it could be, if you go out to the edges with your writing. Pro? Not yet. But the potential is there so you’re ahead in the game.

    • #190641
      Avatarbirdcat
      Participant

      Anthony –

      I would echo what the others have said but take heart in that these criticisms are very constructive and can be solved using technical means and practice in filming and editing (while others will argue the point, you can fix a wealth of issues in post, just takes a lot longer than if you have it good on tape first time).

      What you do have is a story (albeit not one I would watch twice) and some vision of what you want to say and show – Try to develop that as it is not only a good thing to have in creating video, but in still photography, writing and public speaking and will serve you well in future years.

      Hone your technical skills and spend time developing your minds eye and practice, practice, practice at bringing those two things closer to excellent.

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