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August 24, 2011 at 10:07 PM #46155jnkvcsParticipant
Schizophrenic short film about a girl staying alone in the university dorm at a weekend. She starts to experience some inexplicable and mysterious phenomenons like time travels. There is also rumors about a guy who fell down the dorm stairs and died a few years ago.
This is my first DSLR short film and I’m new to this stuff. If you have any advice let me know, I’m open to constructive criticism.
Adobe Premiere Pro CS3
Adobe After Effects CS3
Canon EOS 550D
Tamron 28 – 75mm lens
Helios 44M lens
Jupiter 9 lens
M42 lens to Canon EOS adapter
Manfrotto 701HDV video head
Fomei Alumin 400 tripod
DIY camera slider
August 29, 2011 at 2:19 AM #190635vid-e-o-manParticipant
J J, you built suspense well and left the viewer with questions at the end. you accomlished a lot in just 4+ minutes. The shooting and editing seemed to compliment the effect that you wanted in the video. You confused me a little bit with the black and white (but then I’m not the sharpest tool in the box). Over all I found it well done. Keep shooting.
August 29, 2011 at 2:20 AM #190636vid-e-o-manParticipant
Oh yeah and I really liked the slider shot of the table and props.
August 29, 2011 at 8:49 PM #190637PJParticipant
Great short film! I just wish there was more of a reason for it, it just seems to lack a purpose
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