Feedback on my first teaser trailer

[Anonymous]

Hello, i have been a longtime fan of videomaker, i am an actor/director/writer, i recently produced/starred/directed/wrote my first film, i have been in post-production the past 2 months now, and i recently put up our first teaser trailer, was wondering if i can get some feedback of what you guys think of my first teaser. thanks vincent

myspace.com/charliethemovie

[NewBirthProductions]

Over all lighting was good, only a few scenes where the lighting clashed with your clothing choice. I.E. the party scene was dark and most actors was wearing black or dark cloths tend to make their bodys disapear.

Camera placment and shots looked professional.

My speakers took a pepsi bath last night so i can’t comment on the audio.

not hearing the audio I was lost as to the plot and with the heavy fades I found it impossable to keep up. I.E. the very first scene with the two ladys on the couch I got dizzy with the fades.

Over all I would say your trailer is above advarge. Much better then my spealing.

[birdcat]

I liked it overall – Even better that it made me want to see more.

I found the audio a bit difficult – you may want to adjust the music/voice levels better (my speakers sounded like there was some distortion).

Please let me know when and where it’s released.

[Author]

Posts