DEAD MAN WALKING
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this is a film i’ve recently made. the audio on the 2nd half is poor but i’m going to re dub it to get rid of the wind. please check it out and comment. thanks
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iuZorAaCIIo
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Is pretty good, the only thing thats distracting (just my opinion) is that in the beginning when you’re talking to the camera, you seem to break the 180 rule, and you cut during every dialogue, which tend to take away the kick from the story. It makes it seem like you read one line, stop thecamerawent to another position, say the next dialogue, and repeat. It would be better in my opinion that yourecord one whole take from a certain angel, and then few more take of the same thing at another angel. Even though there will be wasted energy and time, in some part that your not even going to use, it will still build up your character as you continue your dialogue, and there will be a better continuity of your character