This is a commercial I've created for a local business. I've done multiple videos for them before, including a previous commercial. The only new footage in this commercial are the clips of the girls at beginning and end. All the other footage is older, from older videos I shot for the company.
So this is only my 3rd actual TV commercial, most of my work is for the web, where time constraints aren't an issue. Anyone have any feedback or advice they can give on the effectiveness or value of this commercial as such?