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p0th3ad's picture
Last seen: 1 year 5 months ago
Joined: 12/10/2012 - 10:11pm

hello, i'm a little new to this website, and i mainly come here in search for critisicm. while i may have not been editing for long, it keeps me motivated to hear how im doing, what i can improve on, or learning new tips. so i present a few of my works, in hopes of hearing what the fine folks here have to say:

for starters, i have a short Half Life 3 Teaser:

in all honesty, i'm not very fond of it. it was pretty much a copy paste of copilots tutorial, except with a few added seconds. i really made it to break in after effects, since it used a wide range of AE's tools.

 

second, an unfinished typography test:

pretty self explanitory

 

lastly, a Face Form with trapcode:

i look forward what some of you have to say!



Anniina's picture
Last seen: 1 year 3 months ago
Joined: 06/07/2013 - 3:33am

Hey, nice job. I really like the typography test! Would be nice to see more of your works (maybe some longer ones). Either way I liked your teaser as well, it was short and sweet. I'm pretty much a beginner so I don't know if I have a place to give you critisism, but even so it would be hard to say with such short clips. Also I don't see anything negative, keep up the good work.