Gavin,
You have a very nice website and your stylistic treatments and artful editing show that you are very talented. But because others who may be thinking of entering the wedding video market may be reading these posts, I feel obligated to point out a few things..
You state that your XL1's are great in low light, yet even though this wedding was apparently shot outdoors, the color saturation is weak, which is often the case when a camera is pushing its low-light capabilities. The stats on XL1's and 2's indicate they are not nearly as low-light capable as VX-2100's and PD-170's which are the preferred wedding video instruments.
Also, while expert videographers can get away with hand holding while doing zooms or following moving subjects, etc., (and you did an excellent job of hand holding), hand holding is NOT the way to go while shooting a stationary scene for twenty minutes which is about how long the average ceremony is.
I would urge all new wedding videographers to use tripods, at least during the ceremony. I would hope that those who are not new in this business would not need this advice because they always use tripods during the ceremony.
You've already stated that you'll use lapel mics in the future, so I'll leave the topic of audio alone.
As for the stylistic treatment - While I think you did these very tastefully in this video, I have seen others who thrusted themselves so forcefully into the video with stylistic camera moves and editing gimmicks, that I can't imagine the bride and groom ever feeling that this is "their" wedding video - it becomes more of the videographer's self-expression.
Again, this criticism is only to help those who are new to the field, or considering entering the wedding video field, I think you've shown considerable talent and promise in this work.
Oh, and as for a great videographer being able to produce good stuff with a camera phone - let me ask this:
Could Mario Andretti have won races in a Pinto?
I have to say that I feel such thinking is indicative of a videographer's attitude that his video is all about himself - which is fine if you're producing your own work. But when you're hired to shoot someone's wedding, the video should be about THEM and not about the videographer. Or, at least, that's my opinion.