Gorilla Gone Wild

1. svtcobraltd
   Member

   

    This movie is based upon a true story of a nephew who wanted to surprise his uncle on his 50th birthday. The uncle, who lived in Arizona, was quite surprised to find out  This movie is based upon a true story of a nephew who wanted to surprise his uncle on his 50th birthday. The uncle, who lived in Arizona, was quite surprised to find out that he was hanging out with his nephew that whole time, who is from Pennsylvania. Follow the nephew on his adventures before arriving in Arizona for the big surprise.

    Video - http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=40171043

   Posted 3 years ago #

2. svtcobraltd
   Member

   

   Anyone want to comment?

   Posted 3 years ago #

3. svtcobraltd
   Member

   

   Would like to hear some input on this

   Posted 3 years ago #

4. birdcat
   Moderator

   

   Make it shorter - I couldn't get past the first three minutes.

   Bruce Paul
   7Squared Productions
   http://www.7squared.com

   Posted 3 years ago #

5. chrisColorado
   Member

   

   Yeah. Much shorter would really help. shorter shots and a lot shorter movie. i skipped around the first couple minutes and it was still boring. It would also help to get a greateer variety of camera angles in your shots.

   I know because I've made a film like that too. Mine was so bad, 5 minutes was still too long. In mine, I compromised the story because I liked the music (which I created). BAD IDEA!

   I hope I didn't offend you. Good luck on your future films!

   Posted 3 years ago #

6. Don
   Member

   

    "Girls gone wild"

   "Gorilla gone wild"

   seriously?

   ???????

   hey look, there's a squirrel on my lawn! 

   (sorry add) 

   Posted 3 years ago #

7. svtcobraltd
   Member

   

   Yeah. Much shorter would really help. shorter shots and a lot shorter movie. i skipped around the first couple minutes and it was still boring. It would also help to get a greateer variety of camera angles in your shots. I know because I've made a film like that too. Mine was so bad, 5 minutes was still too long. In mine, I compromised the story because I liked the music (which I created). BAD IDEA! I hope I didn't offend you. Good luck on your future films!

   No offending here, just wanted some ideas on the whole project.  Others have watched it and liked it but no one really that does any kind of editing so I definitely like peoples ideas and thoughts on it.

   Posted 3 years ago #

8. Don
   Member

   

    ok here's an idea....

   If I saw a guy in a gorrilla suit, on the street, in real life, unless he had a gun to my head, he'd hold my attention for maybe, 15-40 seconds.

   That's would be about how long you have to roll the title, and give me a reason to watch to the end. You didn't pitch a story worth waiting for, in the time it took for me to lose interest. Do you see where I'm going with this?

   Posted 3 years ago #

9. svtcobraltd
   Member

   

   Yes I do.  This was originally made because of my uncle surprise party that we showed up at the end.  The rest was filmed as the ideas arose.  Nothing was scripted or really planned other that ideas in my head.  Once I got this done to show my family, I wanted to get others thoughts on it.  I really like that people are chiming in on this, we were thinking about doing another one and I see what people are saying about grabbing people's attention more with it.  Thanks to everyone for posting, it is always a help.

   Posted 3 years ago #

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