"Changed" - an experimental drama short about a transsexual

1. Venkat
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   made by high school students.  shot on a canon vixia hf s21.  any input would be appreciated :)

   Posted 9 months ago #

2. Venkat
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   oh and here's a trailer for it:  

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   (at the time the trailer was made, the movie was untitled)

   Posted 9 months ago #

3. vid-e-o-man
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   Venkat, great opening shot! I found myself immersed in the story. There were a lot of things left not said and unexplained, this made it hold my attention for the nearly seven minutes.  I am still trying to sort out in my mind the symbolism of the train track shot- person on a journey or contemplating suicide or ?. Keep shooting.

   Posted 9 months ago #

4. WSanford
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    Well done! Just like the title of the thread it was a train wreck you couldn't turn away from but the work was great. Miss Swann did very well.

   Only thing I really caught out of the corner of my eye was a color shift, like you didn't correct a clip to match on the bleachers scene at 3:09. That jumped out at me. Doesn't really matter but its a fine touch I would have attempted to fix. Just food for thought.

   Posted 9 months ago #

5. birdcat
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   Filming was well done - Watch your framing, particularly in the mirror shots (too much room on the right, not enough on the left).  Using Kevin's tracks was a good idea but sometimes the music overpowered the dialog - watch your levels and maybe look for some background music that is softer while keeping the emotion and more suited to the dialog.

   Overall, very nicely done.

   Bruce Paul
   7Squared Productions
   http://www.7squared.com

   Posted 9 months ago #

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