Bitter Old Man

1. sonnyboo
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   This is an intense drama about racism.

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   Posted 1 year ago #

2. shippocaio
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   1 - I really liked it. The only part where i saw the room for improvement was when he throws the glass at the wall, and there is the weird 1.5 seconds slow-mo. I think it would look better if you didn't cut to the glass at all, but just added the shattering sound, and maybe, when the guy falls,  get a low angle on the broken pieces of glass with the guy out of focus through the glass.... I dont know if you can picture what i am saying xD

    

   2 - I though the part where jesus shows up and "teleports" was pretty cool :)

    

   3 - 5:42, i dont like how his face in centered up... maybe put him on a rule of thirds...

    

   I didnt mean to sound bratty xD but i really liked it :)

   Posted 1 year ago #

3. lomaymi
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   I like it too and I share it with my Facebook friends. Good work!

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   Posted 1 year ago #

4. Chuck Zoots
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   I liked it too good story

   Posted 1 year ago #

5. Charles Schultz
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    What really is disturbing is that to some people today, this is exactly their attitude. Sony Boo, the only improvement I could suggest would be a close up of the glass breaking, I know, it is contradictory to what others have said. All in All, great Job.

   Posted 1 year ago #

6. pseudosafari
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    I really like this, too.  The effects used for the afterlife were great and really caught my eye.  At the risk of being contradictory to the above, too, I can add that I like the centering of the face at 5:32 (to me, it did seem to fit with the message and that part of the movie).  Other than that the only criticism I had was that I had difficulty hearing the son compared to the Bitter Old Man.  It shows how difficult audio can be to work with.  Overall, I really enjoyed this!  Thanks for sharing it.

   Posted 1 year ago #

7. sonnyboo
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   Unfortunately, I shot this over 10 years ago and recently re-did the effects work. Thanks for all the comments everyone.

    

   The original version and edit is here

    

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   Posted 1 year ago #

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